Welcome to another Tuesday celebrating bookish events, from Tuesday/First Chapter/Intros, hosted by Bibliophile by the Sea Every Tuesday, Diane at Bibliophile by the Sea posts the opening paragraph (sometime two) of a book she decided to read based on the opening. Feel free to grab the banner and play along.
My opening this week comes from Intrusion by Mary McCluskey
Blurb
A loving couple, grieving the loss of their son, finds their marriage in free fall when a beautiful, long-lost acquaintance inserts herself into their lives.
Kat and Scott Hamilton are dealing with the hardest of losses: the death of their only child. While Scott throws himself back into his law practice in Los Angeles, Kat is hesitant to rejoin the workplace and instead spends her days shell-shocked and confused, unable to focus.
When an unwelcome face from Kat’s past in England emerges—the beautiful and imposing Sarah Cherrington—Kat’s marriage is thrown into a tailspin. Now wealthy beyond anything she could have imagined as a girl, Sarah appears to have everything she could need or want. But Sarah has an agenda and she wants one more thing. Soon Kat and Scott are caught up in her devious games and power plays.
Against the backdrops of Southern California and Sussex, in spare and haunting prose, Mary McCluskey propels this domestic drama to its chilling conclusion. Amazon
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First Chapter ~ First Paragraph ~ Intro
Chapter One
The narrow hotel bar, with its dull, disgusting light, ran alongside the crystal ballroom. Kat Hamilton, seated on a barstool at the far end of the room, slipped her fourth gin and tonic and wished that she could fade like a ghost into the wall. The formal attire pinched. She had worn only casual clothes since the funeral; on bad days she wore her nightshirt all day. On this evening, the classic black dress chafed against her skin, like a winter sweater on sunburn.
This extract comes from a proof copy.
So what do you think? Would you keep reading?
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Very descriptive. I would definitely keep reading for the story sounds intriguing!
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Doesn’t it just – I’m looking forward to finding out more!
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I’d definitely want to keep reading. I just finished the Stepmother and it sounded as devious as this one.
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Oh I’ve seen The Stepmother around and wondered what it was like!
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Oh, it sounds as though this one’s got some very dark things beneath the surface, Cleo! And I do like the writing style in the snippet you shared. I’ll be interested in your impression when you’ve finished it.
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It does sound as though it is going to be very dark indeed! I’ll keep you posted.
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Sounds like my kind of read so I’m putting it on my list.
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Great news Catherine – I do hope you enjoy it if you get around to reading it.
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I’d like to read more. I want to know more about this woman and what’s going on.
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I’ve just read your Tuesday post and wrote more or less the same thing!! I think wanting to know more about other lives is what drives a lot of my reading – I’m just nosy.
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It sounds a little freaky. It sounds like a TV show that would keep me up at night. HaHa!
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Oh yes, I can see where you are coming from with that comment.
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Past tense – hurrah! 4 gins and a funeral – hmm!! 😉 Seriously, though, I do like the writing style from the snippet, even if the storyline doesn’t appeal much to me. Looking forward to hearing what you think of it…
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Haha I think you are looking to find objections as a way to bolster your willpower – it won’t work in the long term – I’ll keep you posted 😉
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I have this one waiting patiently…and I don’t think I’ll be able to wait much longer! It sounds wonderful, doesn’t it, with all those power plays and a possibly evil agenda? Thanks for sharing…and for visiting my blog.
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It does sound so good especially on the evil agenda front – a bit like my recent read Watching Edie which had a similar sense of dread.
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I would carry on reading for the description more than the intro.
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I understand where you’re coming from – it’s not the punchiest start to a book but the synopsis does promise good things.
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This sounds like a made-for-TV Lifetime movie! Definitely sounds like Sarah has an evil agenda. I’d probably keep reading!
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Yes I like a story with an evil agenda and this does seem to fit the bill!
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I liked that intro and would love to read more Cleo.
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Great news Diane 🙂
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This is a pretty good opening! I’d be curious to know more…
Thanks for sharing,
Lauren
http://www.shootingstarsmag.blogspot.com
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Thanks for visiting Lauren – it does sound as though it is going to take us on quite a ride indeed.
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I’m already imagining all the possible directions this could go. Sounds intriguing.
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Not a book I would pick up.
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